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As my Mother Dies.

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  • Started 5 months ago by purebrilliance
  • Latest reply from words_like_rain22
  1. purebrilliance

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    A distraught figure
    Standing in thedim kitchen
    Tears gracefully falling one by one
    My mother dies a little more

    Her mind filled with disbelief
    Not knowing she deserves so much more
    but yet she puts herself down at every tunr
    my mother dies a little more

    every shower she wishes to wash the damage away
    The damage she didn't even cause
    Every time she goes to bed, she wishes it werea time machine
    my mother dies a little more

    A broken soul, due to a shattered life
    Every tear, sends her into more hatred towards herself
    She wishes to give up, but tries to fade into the sunlight
    my mother dies a little more.

    As my mother dies, i try to be her antidote, her cure
    I flash a smile, strike her up in laughter, be her hope
    I try to support her, be her keeper, with my help
    My mother shall die no more.

    Copyright 2008. Sarah-Kate Salmon

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    Posted 5 months ago #
  2. iTabitha

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    Joined: Nov '07

    this is really depressing.. but i love it! very emotional <3

    Posted 5 months ago #
  3. Brooke

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    Joined: Jul '08

    this is depressing:(

    Posted 1 month ago #
  4. words_like_rain22

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    Joined: Jun '08

    wow. that was amazing. and sad.

    Posted 1 month ago #

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