Teen Poetry: Why Do I Love You? - Posted In (7.0) Poetry & Stories

Post: Why Do I Love You?

why do i love you
after everything you put me thru
you took away my innocent
and my freedom too

you hit me
you hurt me
you abused me
and confused me

but even when u hurt me
and beat me black n blue
i didnt stop to think that
i wasnt right for you

so the pain continued
both nite and day
some day i would
lay and pray

i`d pray for this to stop
for it all to go away
but god was not listening
he didnt have a clue

untill one day
a sunny august afternoon
i woke up
to the sound of some tunes

but this day was different
in many different way
i was safe and home
with my family and friend

my nightmare was over
or was it just a dream?

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iTabitha Says:
January 20th, 2008 at 9:42 pm
Wow! Shocked in amazement! this is really good! Keep Writing!
djtheropy Says:
January 20th, 2008 at 11:11 pm
thanks
Mike Paahana Says:
February 2nd, 2008 at 9:02 pm
any time u feel used girl just get in touch with me and i’ll be there 4 u
djtheropy Says:
February 3rd, 2008 at 1:05 pm
who said a girl wrote it?
iTabitha Says:
February 3rd, 2008 at 6:25 pm
hehe lol maybe he put an “s” by mistake..
djtheropy Says:
February 3rd, 2008 at 7:13 pm
maybe hes trying to hit on me
iTabitha Says:
February 3rd, 2008 at 8:53 pm
maybe.

lol.. tell him ur taken! haha